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Posted by RunWrite - 10-06-20-01:31 PM |
Thank you for the compliment! |
Posted by - 10-05-20-12:00 PM |
Man, that is skillfully tragic, and well written. It reminds me of the apathy of self affliction. Great work here. |
Posted by RunWrite - 10-05-20-09:39 AM |
Such heavy eyes Such labored breath No such luck In avoiding this death Kept close at hand Locked behind with key A metal fire blackened Use only in need Pointing at a mind apart Lungs and heart in pain It takes our eyes locked No waivered aim |