I'm glad you liked it!

So true, and so bright, captured in essence, the family tragedy. The way you bring the meaning together as only a poet can. Brilliant.

Oh, the heartbreak, the pure tradegy, the life events. The ghostly afterlife. This is a delicate, well written, super creative, work of pure poetic ambition.

Loved it! Thanks for posting this tale of mastered tales.

thank you for the compliment! i am glad you found it enjoyable!

A whispered, passionate romantic poem, nicely done!

10-20-20-10:37 PMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: I felt like I was on a travel vacation, this piece captures the vision of the mood, wonderfully.

It's good to hear the inspiration for this poem comes through clearly. I'm happy you liked it.

I posted this one for you Mr. Ghost:)

I really don't know how this manifested I was still in a bit of a torpor LOL

I felt like I was on a travel vacation, this piece captures the vision of the mood, wonderfully.

Such a transcending piece Robert, great literary play on the essence of the vision.