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Fog

Hazy timberland
A heavy, wavy fog sings
in spite of the rain]

© Ms. Persa - 09-29-20-03:16 PM


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06-05-22-04:00 PM

Neither haiku nor senryu contain metaphor. "a" and "the" are fillers for syllable count. Suggest revising.
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