Keep Me In Your Dreams
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Just another rookie attempt at writing a poem using an iambic pentameter as a form. Written for PoetryLake.com - metered
Never write poetry for those like me,
not tomorrow, or when in deep sorrow. But your heart will always remember me, tonight, tomorrow, just not forever. Never express your loving words for me, not tomorrow, or when in deep sorrow. But let the breeze rest against your cheek, as you daydream under the summer oak tree. Never write poetry for those like me, but think of me when you write the last verse. Leave a tip for this poet? Lost_Coast has chosen to ask for tips. Any donation is made directly to this poet, and is greatly appreciated.
Interesting stuff here. i like it a lot.
a strange poem, good job :)
Poem does not meet the intended iambic pentameter its writer intended--none of the lines are such.
The story line is nonsensical, and tries to gush poetic style where none exists. |
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I'm just here for the snacks and drinks. I was a member of this site many years ago. Back when Starlite members merged with the cafe. And I have always enjoyed it. So, about me, I am a budtender by day, full time coder by night, part time writer by moonlight, and I am also a website developer, with a couple of sites in the mix, and just for the fun of it, I built an archive-poetry website, and I also tossed in some WC and Starlite aspects, for the fun of it. I post poems all around the internet, and the cafe was just one of my spots.
Check out the poetry archive called PoetryLake.com, you can also post your own poems if you feel like it.
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