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Keep Me In Your Dreams

"Just another rookie attempt at writing a poem using an iambic pentameter as a form. Written for PoetryLake.com - metered"

posted in Metered by 06-30-20-12:44 PM

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I'm just here for the snacks and drinks. I was a member of this site many years ago. Back when Starlite members merged with the cafe. And I have always enjoyed it. So, about me, I am a budtender by day, full time coder by night, part time writer by moonlight, and I am also a website developer, with a couple of sites in the mix, and just for the fun of it, I built an archive-poetry website, and I also tossed in some WC and Starlite aspects, for the fun of it. I post poems all around the internet, and the cafe was just one of my spots. Check out the poetry archive called PoetryLake.com, you can also post your own poems if you feel like it. Important information about the poetry archive: Poetry Lake is a working, modeled platform I built for a ghost stories website, it is a clone of the ghost stories website I built, and...so the point is, I need to change out some of the old images within the Poetry Lake website because these images relate to the ghost stories website.

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A guest user in Keep Me In Your Dreams

Poem does not meet the intended iambic pentameter its writer intended--none of the lines are such.
The story line is nonsensical, and tries to gush poetic style where none exists.

Ms. Persa in Keep Me In Your Dreams

09-29-20-03:29 AMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: Interesting stuff here. i like it a lot.

So true

Mr. Ghost Stories in Keep Me In Your Dreams

09-30-20-03:56 PMMs. Persa Wrote: a strange poem, good job :)

thanks

Ms. Persa in Keep Me In Your Dreams

09-29-20-03:29 AMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: Interesting stuff here. i like it a lot.

this is very good, I agree

Ms. Persa in Keep Me In Your Dreams

09-29-20-03:29 AMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: Interesting stuff here. i like it a lot.

I agree with you

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Lost_Coast in kite

09-30-20-11:35 PMAardvark Wrote:
09-30-20-11:11 PMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote:
09-30-20-10:55 PMMs. Persa Wrote: A silly little poem there Mr. Ghost

Thank you so much Ms. Persa, yep, this is silly.

silly, exactly!

can I join in?

Lost_Coast in Eddy

09-30-20-08:10 PMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote:
09-29-20-01:34 PMLost_Coast Wrote: Cute poem

lol yea it is

thanks!

Lost_Coast in Eddy

Cute poem

Lost_Coast in One Cold and Cloudy Rise

09-15-20-05:57 PMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: This is a masterpiece poem, IMO. Here is why, it is poetry that writes itself through the poet, the meaning writes itself in poetic form. Such talent my friend.

agreed

Lost_Coast in Keep Me In Your Dreams

09-29-20-03:29 AMMr. Ghost Stories Wrote: Interesting stuff here. i like it a lot.

not bad.

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